Sample deliverable

What a pre-submission statistical review report looks like

Every issue is located in the manuscript, explained in terms of how reviewers respond to it, and paired with a specific fix. Below is a de-identified sample from a Moderate-tier review of a multilevel education study.

Statistical QA Report

Pre-submission statistical review · sample
Manuscript
The Effects of a Classroom Intervention on Student Motivation: A Multilevel Analysis
Tier
Moderate
Reviewer
Nedim Yel, PhD
Sections reviewed
Methods, Results, Tables 2–4
Status
Complete
Scope of review

This review covers the statistical reporting, model specification, and internal consistency of the Methods and Results sections and Tables 2 through 4. It does not evaluate the underlying research design, theoretical framing, or substantive interpretation of findings — only the statistical accuracy and reporting completeness of what is presented.

Summary of findings

Detailed findings

⚑ Flagged

Finding 1 — Degrees of freedom mismatch

p. 11 · Table 2

The Results section reports F(2, 42) for the primary ANOVA, but Table 2 lists N = 39 for the same analysis. With three groups and N = 39, the error degrees of freedom would be 36, not 42; df = 42 would imply N = 45. This kind of mismatch is one of the most common triggers for a statistical reviewer request during peer review.

Suggested fix

Confirm which N was used in the final model (with listwise deletion applied or not) and correct either the text or Table 2 so both match exactly.

⚑ Flagged

Finding 2 — Uncorrected multiple comparisons

p. 12

Post hoc pairwise comparisons are reported across the three intervention groups without a stated correction method (e.g., Tukey, Bonferroni, Holm). Running three pairwise tests at α = .05 without correction inflates the family-wise error rate above the nominal .05 threshold, to roughly .14 if the tests were independent.

Suggested fix

Apply and report a correction method, or justify why uncorrected comparisons are appropriate for this design (e.g., pre-registered planned contrasts).

⚑ Flagged

Finding 3 — Missing intraclass correlation (ICC)

p. 13

The multilevel model clusters students within classrooms but does not report the ICC from the unconditional (null) model. Reviewers in education and school psychology routinely expect the ICC to justify the multilevel approach itself.

Suggested fix

Report the ICC from the null model alongside the design effect, briefly noting the proportion of variance attributable to classroom-level clustering.

✓ Passed

Checks passed

Effect sizes and confidence intervals (throughout). Effect sizes and 95% CIs are reported consistently and match APA 7th edition formatting.

Missing data (p. 10). Handling of missing data with full information maximum likelihood (FIML) is clearly described and appropriate for the design.

Overall recommendation

The core analytic approach is sound and well-suited to the research questions. The three flagged issues above are all addressable without re-running the primary models, and resolving them substantially reduces the likelihood of a reviewer statistical critique. No re-analysis is recommended at this time.

This is a de-identified sample report for illustration. Manuscript title, findings, and figures are fictional and constructed to demonstrate report format and depth.

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